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   All  these years of blocking my emotions has left me cold,
Thus this has left me with no hand nor friend to hold,
  Truth be told, I’m afraid of life,
    But I stand tall in this fear with all my might,
For it feels as if  I’ve been dressed in a dream,  
     That turns into a nightmare when pulled at the seams,
I can attempt to cover up but everything shows,
           So what is there to do now? Cry, no laugh I suppose,
Keep life forever more veiled as tinted glass,
                      Invisible the inside ; going outward a mask,
For loneliness can’t be killed and shame will always show,
               That’s why in my heart my graves’ on the front row ,
    Yet, I am hesitant to place flowers above my head,  
                     Because of this day and time I only
                                     Play Dead.
©2008-2009 ~DeadPoet4lyfe
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inspired by a song by H.I.M

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:iconimaraven:
very pretty one! I also love H.I.M.
:iconwriter54:
Hey, you put in here!! As I said before, its great!! One of favs.

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"No good deed goes unpunished."

-Wicked!
:icondeadpoet4lyfe:
yeaz katie!!

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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
It is the bitter potion by which the physician within you heals your sick self. Therefore trust the physician, and drink his remedy in silence and tranquility.
:iconloudwisdom:
H.I.M! Ok this poem is amazing, its one of my faves, once again an amazing deviation

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a persons poem your glimpsing at their very soul.
:icongarnet233:
The very first two lines were my favorite. It reminded me of a Shakespeare play at the end with ';Play Dead'. Anyways, I liked it. If you'd like a more advanced critique I think there was a couple punctuation errors but it's not really all that big of an issue. ^^
:icongarnet233:
.....Have I mentioned that I despise emotes? Every time I go to write something, one pops up because it thinks I meant to use it. No. What I meant to say was "Play Dead".
:icondeadpoet4lyfe:
thanx

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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
It is the bitter potion by which the physician within you heals your sick self. Therefore trust the physician, and drink his remedy in silence and tranquility.
:icondeadpoet4lyfe:
lol :)

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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
It is the bitter potion by which the physician within you heals your sick self. Therefore trust the physician, and drink his remedy in silence and tranquility.

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